I think the shorter poem was as thoughtful and full of meaning as the longer one. We definitely need to take time to just be, just appreciate where we are while we can. And we all feel that struggle to find air to breathe, light to see, and the balance to live as we should. Very insightful.
Both were thought and feeling provoking, moving me deeper.
“When you can still go home” slayed me. A wall of memories washed over my memory.
I think the shorter poem was as thoughtful and full of meaning as the longer one. We definitely need to take time to just be, just appreciate where we are while we can. And we all feel that struggle to find air to breathe, light to see, and the balance to live as we should. Very insightful.