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Ralph Rosenberg's avatar

While I am worried about conceding too much to the algorithms of Substack, I give kudos to you for your audible and being open to the different presentations. I realize I am using a football metaphor in your poetry; I have played more football than written poetry.

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Suzanna de Baca's avatar

HA! I have no idea what happened. I am super open to football analogies! And open to the universe. But I am still going to consider my first poem the "RIGHT ONE."

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Ginny Fletcher's avatar

I recognized the writing as a prose poem and found it refreshing and imaginative! Assumed the format was purposeful.

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