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Jim Wooley's avatar

Nice. Your poems take me back to a time growing up as a boy in Michigan, 60+ years ago, and two grandma's who gardened, and cooked and canned. I remembered the smells, and their old stoves, and their kitchens and houses. We have the recipes, and my Mom's, in their precise handwriting, and when we dust them off to make the favorites on the holidays, it's like traveling in time. Thanks.

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Suzanna de Baca's avatar

I'm so pleased these poems transport you. I too remember the smells of my grandmothers' kitchens and I associate those memories with love. I"m grateful for that. Thank you for the comment.

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Robert Leonard's avatar

Simply incredible poetry. Like summer gardens, you are ripe with words that glisten with dew.

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Suzanna de Baca's avatar

Appreciation as always!

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Cynthia Turner's avatar

Your words bring the days back so clearly! My brother and I always talk about why things always tasted better then! Your words of the cabbage are just perfection! I'm loving the reference to "teacher writing." That includes many of us now.

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Andrea Dorn's avatar

Congratulations Suzanna. Your poems both took me back, the first to both of my grandmothers, wishing I could read their writing again. The second, to neighbors, long-gone, but remembered quite fondly. So relatable.

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Suzanna de Baca's avatar

Thank you, Andrea! That means a lot. Hope all is well!

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Andrea Dorn's avatar

Yes, just a little stressed trying to shore up the Cat Writers' Association Conference. I had two speakers cancel on me, but I think I've replaced them now. Whew!

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Tim Grover's avatar

Brings to mind "Canned Goods" by Greg Brown, and reminds me of Grandma Raney's fried chicken. She told us the neck was her favorite piece, while us kids gobbled up the legs & wings! Great writing!!!

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Suzanna de Baca's avatar

Thank you for your comment. It was fun to have the connection to Greg Brown's song. What a voice. I also googled "canned food poems" and there were a lot. All part of our memories.

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Chris Henning's avatar

Can almost smell those kitchens ❤️

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Suzanna de Baca's avatar

Exactly. The smell of love and busy-ness!

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Artis Reis, Former Judge's avatar

These poems touched my heart, from my small-town upbringing to my current dealing with changes, large and profound. Thank you for sharing these words and images!

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Suzanna de Baca's avatar

Thank you, Ardis! Appreciate the kind words.

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Ardyth Gillespie's avatar

I love it. Thanks.

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Suzanna de Baca's avatar

Appreciate your comment, Ardyth!

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Kent Zimmerman's avatar

👍congratulations too!

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Suzanna de Baca's avatar

Thanks for the thumbs up, Kent!

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Beth Hoffman's avatar

I love the juxtaposition of the growing garden, the consistency of it, to the uncertainty of life. How comforting a cabbage is!

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Suzanna de Baca's avatar

Thanks, Beth. Glad that comes across. It was such irony that everything in nature was overflowing. But then, inevitably, fall arrives and the cycle repeats.

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Virginia Traxler's avatar

I love these poems so much. My grandmother had that handwriting. I remember sitting in her kitchen, spreading butter on top of warm rolls while she readied the rest of a Sunday dinner. I remember the tomatoes and the gooseberries and can see the cabbage orbs. Thank you for reminding me of those long summer days in my grandmother’s loving orbit.

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Suzanna de Baca's avatar

Exactly! Miss my grandma!

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Suzanna de Baca's avatar

Thanks so much for the comment. I think everything my grandmother made was definitely better!

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