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suzieQ's avatar

Thanks as always for your thoughtful poetry. All of life may be a metaphor 🥰

And as such, seems like the guy on top is in a precarious position.

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Suzanna de Baca's avatar

Both, but the pit guy generally had a face full of sawdust and then missed the mark…

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Michael Judge's avatar

Echoes of Robert Frost! Poignant poem.

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Suzanna de Baca's avatar

Had not even thought of that!

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Kathi Zimpleman's avatar

Thank you, Suzanna, for weaving a dangerous physical task from history with what is happening today with the equally dangerous technology upending way too much of our lives.

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Heide Exner Larson's avatar

Love it!

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Tim Grover's avatar

This is brilliant!

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