Poetry featured in The Letter Review
"The Camino" short-listed for The Letter Review Prize for Poetry
I had a friend who flew all the way from Chicago to Madrid and then caught a train and then took a bus and then hailed a taxi all so she could walk the Camino de Santiago de Compostela it took twenty-four hours just to get to the trail It was her dream she told me her heart still sick with grief from the death of a son she was called to walk to make a pilgrimage to honor his memory to shake herself free from the yoke of loss from the heaviness that haunted her After she returned she reported that the trail was crowded with people shoulder to shoulder the road strewn with garbage and everyone jabbering all along the way oh my I exclaimed was it even worth it I was shocked to hear her say brightly yes yes I loved every minute of it she told me she did the short route and talked the entire way to all the interesting people she met Today I am walking on a dirt path in the river valley by your hometown not a soul in sight you have been gone for four months patches of snow cover the dried grass frozen cow pies litter the ground like accidental cobblestones frost hugs the leaves and branches the morning sun glistens beams of light reflecting the trees and sky in the running stream I spy a stray squirrel zipping across the meadow flying up the side of a burr oak chattering to no one in particular a lone rabbit making tracks in the white snow a blue jay perched alone on a post singing its whisper song a soft conglomeration of clicks chucks whirrs whines overhead a turkey vulture slowly circles something freshly dead Are they looking for someone too here in the shadow of the cottonwood here in the shimmer on the river here in the crunch of February frost peeking around every bend every branch I hear a voice in the woods saying camino camino camino the camino is in your heart
NOTE: I was very pleased to have “The Camino” short-listed for The Letter Review Poetry prize. This prose poem (and many others you may see in the future) as well as the photo emerged on a weekend pilgrimage to Whiterock Conservancy in Coon Rapids, Iowa. If you ever have a chance to visit Whiterock, I encourage you to check out the beauty of its various ecosystems, gorgeous at any time of year.
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I love the turn to your own experience, Suzanna, walking your dirt path.
Very touching. I'll admit, after reading this I had to look up "Camino," but now I understand the story more fully. Wonderful.